WaLT:identify how a writer use words to set the scene.
In Ruru we are learning about the setting of a stroy.We used the picture book,Frederick,to describe the setting.
Emilee Paragraph
On a hot warm spring day at launch time I had a picnic in the sunny meadow.laid out picnic blanket and took off my shoes and socks.I put feet on the the long soft green grass.I laid down for a minute and heard the birds sing as the leaves are rustling and the trees swishing side to side as i smell the cold fresh breezy air blowing the sweet flowers.The light blue sky is as beautiful as a little butterflies.The big long brown bumpy tree is like a hard rock and i am calm.
Hi Emilee😺
I really like how you described the setting.
your writing is relaxing.
maybe next time try not to say I to much.
thank you zariah i did not see i used to much I’s in my story.
Hi! i love all the detail you have added in your writing,you
make me inspired whenever i read it!:>
thank you
thankkkkkkkk youuuuuuuuuuu for that comment.
Hi Emilee I love your work story it was really descriptive but maybe pay attention to your spelling. That’s all from me
From Shanaya Bye bye!!!!
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